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 The story of The Garden of Nedé: An alternate Eden 

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 The story of The Garden of Nedé: An alternate Eden 
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In the alternate dimension where the Catears and Humans live in peace a teen fox girl, who is the only one of her kind EVER!, is roaming the large garden of Nedé. This large garden was where she was born at a time when Cat G(od) was lonely and wanted a world upon which peace and harmony could remain rampant throughout the world. The first creature he made after he had made land to stand upon and sunlight to see with during the day and moonlight to see with during the night and luscious plants to tower the ground was a male cat. He, let's call him Andrew, was created from the sunlight. The second creature was made that night when Andrew complained about the fact that Cat G would not come down of his cloud lay-back chair and rub his back. Complaining about how none of the other creatures could rub his back like Cat G had when he had made him in the sky. So with the moonlight Cat G created a female fox for Andrew, let's call her Lynn. "WTF! This four-legged fox ca CLEAR~LY not rub my back like you can with your two legs and five slightly-webbed fingers~!" Andrew said angrily.

"Well sor~ry! /side comment/Jeez!/side comment off/ Fine! I'll make someone like me, so you can be rubbed whenever you like." Cat G said exasperatedly.

The third creature Cat G made was made of the dirt and mud of the ground so that Andrew would be disgusted by her appearance, but when Cat G was finished with the five-fingered, two-legged creature he was creating for Andrew he found that he had made her extraordinary beautiful instead of hideous. While Cat G created the human girl, Fauna, Andrew got to know Lynn and they fell "slightly" in love. After a breeding session, of which we shall not speak due to forum rules and my lack of good description skills, Lynn was pregnant with something that was bigger than she was. Just around the time that Andrew and Lynn found out about this, Fauna was introduced to the horny Andrew (please don't ban me for using that word) and his expecting technically girlfriend, since there was no marriage at the time. Nor was their any clothing, so one look at Fauna had Andrew drooling and right in front of Lynn, Andrew was doing things to Fauna that no 13 years old and under human should hear (and or read~) about.

Lynn, disgusted, ran from that horrid scene into a cave some miles away from Andrew's betrayal. Two days later~, Lynn knew that he was about to have the baby that Andrew had put in her womb and she knew that if she bore this babe she would die a painful death. But! Even though she knew this she let the baby be born anyway. What came out of Lynn was an 18 year old beautiful fox girl with a light red tail with a white tip and ears to match. Lynn named her daughter Aysel, meaning moon flood and/or flood of moonlight.

Lynn's last words to Aysel were, "Never go beyond the reaches of this cave and hide from all and anything that comes inside,"

From that day on Aysel hid in the cave and ate from the dieing bodies of animals inside the cave. Since Aysel was immediately born as an 18 year old her mind wasn't developed enough, but luckily during this time no one aged.

Back in the present, Aysel had just begun her rebellious adolescence phase and since it seemed that no one was in Nedé anymore, she explored the vast garden all over, seeking an exit of sorts. Now long ago a large blue vibration had spread throughout this world and when it came to Aysel's cave it found no living creatures so it left the cave. This vibration was the Vibration of Age, which started the aging process of everything across the world. Since Aysel did not meet the Vibration of Age she was forever stuck in a beautiful 18 year old body. No matter how much she wizened, she would always be 18. But Aysel did not know this, so she found an exit from Nedé and left Nedé.

Only to have the most high-pitched sounds that ever were uttered in her presence. So Aysel ran. Ran from the horrid noises and the large monsters on the black path. Then, Aysel found a place much like Nedé, so she curled up in one of the fern branches and fell asleep

-Chapter 1 End-

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